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Fell Really Flat
Reviewed in Australia on 14 April 2015
This was a major let down. The characters where not lovable, their chemistry was off and the time line and story seemed rushed and all over the place.
I loved the other series, they are some of my favourite reads, however with this i really did not care what happened.
July seemed to want to be sassy but at the same time submitted on a dime, her characteristics did not mesh well and she became someone i didn't care for.
Wes was rushed and i think he lacked major build up. He just was, and that didn't work for me.
I love a great alpha male book and a sassy girl but these two are just not it.
It became predictable, the story line rushed and perhaps it lacked something to make the whole MC part of the book seem real. I think it had potential but in the content department it really fell flat. Some points that i guess where part of the sub characters just didn't make sense time wise.
Its a shame because i am not sure i will read the next one.