Top critical review
Needs a huge amount of editing
Reviewed in Australia on 14 August 2020
Poorly constructed sentences, inappropriate expressions, wrong terms used, revision reminders left in the text and a story that jumps around makes this book irritating to read.
“Engrossed in conversation, which seemed to take minutes, Ryan ambled towards them, holding two stubbies in his hands.” Does that mean he is talking to himself?
“The right to contact a lawyer and or have them present for the investigation.The word “investigation” should be ”questioning”.
The standard of writing only warrants one star but the plot is interesting although with many weaknesses so I give the overall score two stars.